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Thursday, June 4, 2020
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We were learning about how to use polyline and corve.
Kia ora, Aiden. Your avatar looks great. I like the way you captured your big smile. Asking for help in our learning is a great idea, so it is neat that you have identified this as a next step. Next time you need to remember to give Buzz a capital letter.
Hi Aiden, I am a year seven student from Gisborne Intermediate. I really liked the way you managed to capture the main features in your face! Next time maybe put a more in-depth description on the main part at the top. Kia kaha! Hunter C
Hi Aiden i am student from Gisborne Intermediate in Gisborne. I really your polylining you did very well, i really like your glasses the look very good, maybe next time i would polyline my ears as well next time. But you did amazing job. How was lockdown for you? :) :) :)
Kia ora. Aiden My name is James Mackey and I attend Mangapapa school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I like the way you created your avatar and you added your glasses well done
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Kia ora, Aiden. Your avatar looks great. I like the way you captured your big smile. Asking for help in our learning is a great idea, so it is neat that you have identified this as a next step. Next time you need to remember to give Buzz a capital letter.
ReplyDeleteOkay thanks for the feedback and thanks for spotting that.
DeleteHi Aiden,
ReplyDeleteI am a year seven student from Gisborne Intermediate. I really liked the way you managed to capture the main features in your face! Next time maybe put a more in-depth description on the main part at the top.
Kia kaha!
Hunter C
Thank you for the feedback.
DeleteHi Aiden
ReplyDeletei am student from Gisborne Intermediate in Gisborne. I really your polylining you did very well, i really like your glasses the look very good, maybe next time i would polyline my ears as well next time. But you did amazing job. How was lockdown for you? :) :) :)
Hi Libby Thank you for all the feedback I was doing obstacle courses in lockdown what did you do.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora. Aiden My name is James Mackey and I attend Mangapapa school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I like the way you created your avatar and you added your glasses well done
Kia ora. My name is Aiden and I attend Mangapapa school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.
DeleteThanks James, maybe you can give me some feedback.